MY OC TALIA GIFT 6

GIFT, He used my journal entry "MY OC TALIA" (  MY OC'S Entries + Back-Stories + Saemon/S-RanksI hope that bastard on Tumblr, OCCritiques. Actually likes what I've done this time. Need I remind him I am very bad at writing anything, I almost got an F in English. I've tried my best. Especially with being under learning difficulties of Atypical Autism. I don't understand how to tell a story officially, let alone get my point across or talk well with people... So, instead of him taking the piss...If he wants to review them again, please do so. "POLITELY" This time...
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Anyone want to proof read it, highlight the mistakes, or use a different colour text underneath each paragraph.
Save a word document and then send it to me at fsb90sound@gmail.com . Kay?
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Hold Ctrl and F if you want to find them more easily.
Then type Section, then either, Talia, Snow, Dusk or Frankie:
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If you want Saemon's back-story, comment.
*Winks.*
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Section Talia
Hair style: Talia has very very black hair that has a radiant shimmer, styled in a Hime cut, with a slight forehead fringe. The ) as I asked; to understand what she looks like and the terms and concerns ETC.

"REMEMBER"
LEFT EYE = HAZEL
RIGHT EYE = RED

(To Talia).

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Okie so Hurek and I we're talking, he wanted to try to draw my Talia again so I said sure any time. Just so everyone knows the messages I have at the bottom aren't just for show. If any-one, I mean any-one. Wants to draw her. You can, just provide credit that she Is my OC.

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MY OC TALIA TAKEN CARE OF BY

He's the 33rd (Drawn again.) to ever to try and "FINISH HER", think you got what it takes? by all means try I would love to see her draw/digital drawn/digital ETC by anyone.

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(C) MY OC

Visit my group, I have References on how many people did her and in order.
Further more there is a gallery within, to show what they did.
talia-oc.deviantart.com/

MY GALLERY FOR ALL OF THE ATTEMPTS: fansilver.deviantart.com/galle…